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Revise the following statements to make them more positive and courteous.
1. Construction on your building is at a standstill because the contractor is unable to pour foots until the soil is no longer soggy.
2. A passport cannot be issued until an application is completed an a recent photo is included.
3. Your message of April 1 claims that the blade in your food processor malfunctioned. Although you apparently failed to read the operator's manual, we are sending you a replacement blade PLUS another manual. Next time read carefully so that you will know how to attach this blade.
4. Customers are ineligible for the 25 percent discount if they fail to provide the discount code at the time of the purchase.
5. As team leader, you apparently failed to remember that you have already assigned me two gigantic and complex research task, and now you have dumped another big job on me- one that i can't possibly begin until after I have finished the other two jobs.
6. We regret to announce that we can offer the 50 perfect discount only to the first 25 buyers, so act quickly!

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Answer:

Statement Revision for positive and courteous meanings:

1. Work will resume on the building construction as soon as the soil is dry.

2. Please, fill the application and attach a recent photo for the issuance of a passport.

3. We are sending you a replacement blade plus its installation manual.

4. Please, provide the discount code in order to access the 25 percent discount.

5. I will commence this new assignment immediately after I have completed the previous two research tasks.

6. The first 25 customers will enjoy a 50 percent discount.

Explanation:

After the revision of the above statements, they sound more positive and courteous.  Moreover, they have been shortened to eliminate irrelevant phrases.

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