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Read the paragraph.Which sentence from the paragraph has been revisedcorrectly?Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much timeas I can with my family. I often ask my dad, who is anexcellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoytaking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards withmy mom. However, nothing is better than watchingmovies with my loyal, black cat, Max.Even though, my life is very busy, I spend as muchtime as I can with my family.I often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, toplay soccer with me.I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, andplaying cards, with my mom.However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, Max.