Answer :
In an evaluation based on clarity, this would receive the lowest score due to unclear language:
Korns: An erect position, steady on the saddle, but when all is done, the crowning grace is that of apparent ease.
It doesn't convey a whole message. It's difficult to understand what topic she's talking about.
Korns: An erect position, steady on the saddle, but when all is done, the crowning grace is that of apparent ease.
It doesn't convey a whole message. It's difficult to understand what topic she's talking about.