Answer :
I like the line beginning. "The Orchard walls ... " She is observing her circumstances and concluding that if her kinsmen catch him, he is literally dead meat. That does not sound like a thirteen going on fourteen year old girl.
You could pick "Thou knowest the mask of night is on my face ... " she knows how she would react if someone actually saw her in the night. I like this one but would choose the one above it.
The last one shows her being a little annoyed. Just a little. I like her spunk.
You could pick "Thou knowest the mask of night is on my face ... " she knows how she would react if someone actually saw her in the night. I like this one but would choose the one above it.
The last one shows her being a little annoyed. Just a little. I like her spunk.